Fanfic WIP Snippet

[tpena19]

snagged from strangevisitor7

Post a single sentence from each WIP you have (or as many as you want to pick). No context, no explanations. No more than one sentence.

I only have one WIP, and it's my first real fanfic attempt (wrote part of an original story years ago, I'll have to try and finish it too), so I'll post a few sentences.

1) Taken as a whole, it is more than obvious one of the reasons why this man is god chosen - he is simply breathtaking, even when sick and hurt, and not physically at his best. Denai can only imagine the beauty the young man must glow with when healthy. Yet for of all that, beauty is not enough to be a god's chosen. Denai has seen many a desirable person in his life, but this is the first god chosen seen by any in ages. There must be much more to this man than good looks. (all re:Ezra, and Denai is an OMC)

So what do ya think? Be brutal, but not cruel!!

Comments

[ms-artisan.livejournal.com]

Go for it! All WIPs deserve a chance at real life. ;)

[tpena19.livejournal.com]

LOL, ok I'll keep working on it, but slowly cause it's trimester end here and that means grading! arg.