I actually just received a note from one of those with the MS. She thought it was very good, but that the front half is too detail laden - which I've sort of known all along, and have been trimming but not doing as much as I know it needs. Soooo... I guess I'm going to have to do a more serious rework, just as I thought might be needed. I should have listened to my inner voice the first time. There are still two others with it, and one waiting for it, but I think I'm going to go ahead with the rework anyway because I think the first agent's advice is dead on. We'll see how it goes :>
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I actually just received a note from one of those with the MS. She thought it was very good, but that the front half is too detail laden - which I've sort of known all along, and have been trimming but not doing as much as I know it needs. Soooo... I guess I'm going to have to do a more serious rework, just as I thought might be needed. I should have listened to my inner voice the first time. There are still two others with it, and one waiting for it, but I think I'm going to go ahead with the rework anyway because I think the first agent's advice is dead on. We'll see how it goes :>